Title and Author: Rain of the Ghosts, by Greg Weisman
Illustrator: Rhys Davis
Publisher: St. Martin's Press
Published: December 2013Genre: Fantasy
Target Audience/Age Group: Young adult
Part of a Series? Yes
Will the Reviewer Keep It In His/Her Library? No
First line: Rain could hear the drums as she raced past me.
Our reader could not get past this sentence on page one: "She didn't notice my companion or myself, but every other downbeat, she'd look back over her shoulder." Where's the editor? This is a book vfor young adults. Get the grammar right!! You would not say "She didn't notice myself," you say "She didn't notice ME!!!"